Year 5 Reading report comments
Year 5 is about depth: summarising, comparing and commenting on an author's choices. These comments reflect that step up, for readers at every stage.
15 example comments across 3 levels, plus 6 next steps. Type a name below to fill in every comment.
Working at greater depth / exceeding expectations
[Pupil] is a sophisticated reader who comments perceptively on how authors use language and structure. They summarise complex chapters concisely and their written answers are precise and well evidenced.
[Pupil] reads widely and deeply. They compare themes across books, discuss characters' motives with real maturity and challenge others' ideas respectfully in discussion.
Reading is a genuine passion for [Pupil]. They have tackled demanding texts this year, from classic novels to complex non-fiction, and talk about them with insight and enthusiasm.
[Pupil] has excellent comprehension skills. They infer with confidence, explain the effect of figurative language and distinguish between fact and opinion with ease.
[Pupil] brings real depth to every reading discussion. Their ability to explain why an author made a particular choice is well beyond what we expect in Year 5.
Working at the expected standard
[Pupil] is a confident reader with a good understanding of what they read. They retrieve and infer accurately and are developing their ability to comment on the author's language. Explaining the effect of a word choice in more detail is the next step.
[Pupil] reads fluently and has made good progress this year. They summarise texts well and are becoming more confident in justifying their opinions with evidence.
[Pupil] enjoys reading and can discuss the books they read sensibly. Reading a broader range of genres, especially older or more challenging texts, will help them develop further.
[Pupil] has developed well as a reader this year. They understand most texts they meet and are learning to explain how authors create tension and suspense.
[Pupil] reads with understanding and works well in guided reading. Using the precise vocabulary of reading, such as metaphor and personification, will help them explain their ideas.
Working towards the expected standard
[Pupil] has worked hard on their reading this year and is reading more fluently. They can find information in a text and are developing their ability to explain their answers. Regular reading at home will support their progress.
Reading continues to be an area of focus for [Pupil]. With support, they are improving their understanding of longer texts, and they show real determination when a question is difficult.
[Pupil] is making progress in reading and has grown in confidence. They are working on reading longer texts and remembering the key events. Talking about their reading with an adult will help.
[Pupil] finds inference questions challenging but is beginning to use clues from the text to support their answers. We will continue to build on this next year.
[Pupil] has made progress with the support they receive. Choosing books they enjoy and reading little and often will help them build stamina and confidence.
Year 5 reading next steps
Finish a comment with one specific, achievable target. Parents find these the most useful line in a report.
- Explain the effect of a writer's word choice on the reader.
- Summarise the main ideas of a paragraph in a single sentence.
- Distinguish between fact and opinion in non-fiction.
- Identify and explain figurative language such as metaphor and personification.
- Compare how two texts present the same theme.
- Read a book from an author or genre they have never tried.
How to use these comments
Replace [Pupil] with the child's first name and adjust any detail that does not fit your class or school style. These comments are designed to be a solid starting point, not a finished product. The best report comments are the ones where you have added something specific about that child: a particular achievement, a moment you remember, a challenge they have worked through.
If you want to generate comments that are already specific to your pupils, Staffroom does exactly that. Add your notes about each child, choose a tone, and the comments it generates will be genuinely personal rather than adapted from a template.