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Year 3 Science report comments

Year 3 science covers plants, animals including humans, rocks, light, and forces and magnets. These comments describe knowledge and working scientifically at three levels of attainment.

15 example comments across 3 levels, plus 6 next steps. Type a name below to fill in every comment.

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Working at greater depth / exceeding expectations

[Pupil] has a secure understanding of how plants work. They can explain the job of each part of a flowering plant and describe how water is transported from the roots.

[Pupil] approaches investigations scientifically. They set up simple fair tests, make careful measurements and explain what their results show.

[Pupil] understands how light travels and how shadows form. They predicted and measured how shadows change size and explained their findings clearly.

[Pupil] has a strong grasp of forces and magnets. They can predict whether materials are magnetic and explain how magnets attract and repel.

[Pupil] can compare and group rocks by their properties and explain how fossils form. Their scientific vocabulary is precise and confident.

Working at the expected standard

[Pupil] can name the parts of a plant and is learning to explain the job each one does. They took part in our investigations with interest.

[Pupil] understands that we need light to see and that shadows form when light is blocked. Explaining how shadows change is their next step.

[Pupil] can sort materials into magnetic and non-magnetic and enjoys testing their predictions.

[Pupil] knows that humans need the right nutrition and that we have skeletons and muscles for support and movement.

[Pupil] is developing their investigation skills and is learning how to keep a test fair.

Working towards the expected standard

[Pupil] enjoys practical science and is learning to name the parts of a plant.

[Pupil] is beginning to understand that light comes from a source and that shadows form when it is blocked.

[Pupil] enjoyed exploring magnets and is learning which materials are attracted to them.

[Pupil] is learning about the human skeleton and healthy eating. Talking about these topics at home will help consolidate their learning.

[Pupil] benefits from support to record results and explain what they have found. Their confidence in science is growing.

Year 3 science next steps

Finish a comment with one specific, achievable target. Parents find these the most useful line in a report.

  • Explain the job of each part of a flowering plant.
  • Describe how shadows form and how they change size.
  • Predict whether materials are magnetic and test the prediction.
  • Keep a test fair by changing only one thing.
  • Record measurements accurately in a table.
  • Use scientific vocabulary to explain results.

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